I will share my experience and my interpretation of the vn here, I hope that this helps you improve!
Five stars for the beautiful visuals, music, the extra effort to create animations, and the whole UI made from scratch, everything is so pretty!. Just a small opportunity for improvement: In the choice menu, the font is way to bold, is hard to read.
Writing: Sorry, but there are a lot of spelling, grammar and syntax mistakes, everywhere. Please remember to do some proof-reading, I’m sure someone would love to beta-tests your works too.
Almost nothing to interpret, this vn goes straight to the point and in the harsh kind of way, but it has to be this way, because people needs to understand something…
Something very simple…
don’t kill yourself.